DONT UPLOAD UNTIL all actors are filmed for the documentary – will need to add them in credits and include it in my article
Below is my second improved short film (documentary). This documentary is 5mins 21 seconds. When exporting Waseem had sadly become a bit blurry.
Below is my third attempt of a new and improved magazine film review. After analysing other magazine reviews I was more inspired to make it conventional (through layouts, colours etc.)
Below is my third draft for my film poster, I had incorporated my own image and made a few minor tweaks to make the poster stand out more:
Below is my second attempt of my magazine film review, I decided to changed the colour scheme as it appeared more of a horror/action type genre: I feel I need a lot of improving to the review to get it to the final product that I want it to so I’ll be asking peers in my class for guidance.
After analysing the first draft of my film poster I realised I wasn’t being creative nor conventional. After experimenting with the positioning of my text and image I decided to go with a layout which I was happy with. However I’ve taken my main image from Google so for now I will keep it to get a better vision of the final draft.
This image in the poster has inspired me to recreate my own, I’ve ordered the props in hope to create the same message that I want to portray for the next draft.
Below are the questions I will be asking my peers/friends and family for feedback to help me improve my documentary
From this feedback I had received I’m aware that I need to make the editing much more professional and proficient.
My overall improvements:
- Make all my cuts and transitions consistent – maybe do straight cuts and fade when introducing new scenes
- Continuity issues- Close up of the hands need to match the actions in the scene
- Waseem is a bit out of focus- Need to add a sharpen plug in
- Colour correction needed
Suggestions to improve:
- Break the information up- add text facts, news headlines maybe even questions to break up the editing